Kia Ora bloggers.This is my 2 sentences i wrote about a gorilla and a man being Friends For Life.
My 2 sentences from the story.
1. The bald man was now happy because he found a very charming friend
2.A Fearless gorilla sees the cheerless man so with their smartness the gorilla walks up to him and gives him a hug
how do you think i can improve my sentences?
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Vihaan
Kia Ora Bloggers.We have been describing a moment in time.We used adjectives and adverbs to add interest and detail.
Here is my writing
It was a normal day for Jeffrey everything seemed normal until his UFO got struck by lightning. Everything was out of control so Jeffrey pressed all the buttons until something happened.there was a button that opened the hatch but that didn’t work.The only thing he could do was to force the hatch open with his alien super strength, so he did that.After a few seconds the UFO started to fall straight down until Jeffrey stood underneath it and held it up with his super strength.He felt like a hero for a moment then told the people to go to a safe spot.But they couldn’t understand the so he pointed to a place and one person knew what he was trying to say.So he screamed “RUN!!”.They all ran directly towards the man was pointing.When they finally got there,a meteor struck them…TO BE CONTINUED
Have you done a Moment in time writing?
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Vihaan
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